📃 Postmodifier
Like premodifiers, postmodifiers are of different types.
1. Relative Clause:
The journalists wanted to interview the doctor who attended the patient.
They wrote a letter which was signed by the editor and sent it to the doctor. The doctor suggested them to talk to the patient who was recovering quickly.
2. Prepositional Phrase:
The midfielder with a red arm band, in jersy number 10 is Jinadine Jidane.He is the captain of the French Football Team in the World Cup of 2006.
Some important rules to remember:
1. Do not use multiple modifiers unless
each adds a distinct meaning to the sentence.
❎ Undesirable:
The dangerous, vicious dog could not be the defendant in the case,
the dog's irresponsible, inattentive owner could be.
☑️ Better: The vicious dog could not be the defendent in the case,
however the dog's irresponsible owner could be.
2. Avoid squinting modifiers by placing modifiers as close as possible to the
words they modify.
Writers should never say, "Well, you know what I meant."
First Meaning: The judge is permitted to impose criminal sanctions only after
the parties have a right to be heard.
Second Meaning: The judge is permitted to impose only criminal sanctions
after the parties have a right to be heard.
Third Meaning: The judge is only permitted to impose criminal sanctions after the parties have a right to be heard.
Fourth Meaning: Only the judge is permitted to impose criminal sanctions
after the parties have a right to be heard.
In the first meaning, the placement of "only" before "after" tells us when the
judge may impose criminal sanctions.
In the second meaning, the placement of "only" before "criminal sanctions" implies that the judge may not impose other
forms of sanctions.
In the third meaning, the placement of "only" before "permitted" tells us that while sanctions are permitted to be imposed the are not required to be imposed.
In the fourth meaning, the placement of "only" tells us that the judge but not anyone else is permitted to impose criminal sanctions.
3. Avoid Dangling Modifiers by placing Modifiers as Close as possible to the words they modify:
Dangling modifiers, which are Often found at the beginning of a sentence, leave the reader wondering who or what is being modified. In the first incorrect option below, can you tell who spent several hundred hours on the case? In the second incorrect option can you tell who had tried hundreds of cases?
Examples:
❎ Incorrect:
First correct option: Ms. McCormick, who had spent several hundred hours on the case, rejected Ms. Peabody's bill.
Second correct option:
❎ Incorrect: Having tried hundreds of cases, the client had great confidence in her attorney.
First correct option: The client. who had tried hundreds of cases, had great
confidence in her attorney.
Second correct option: The client had great confidence in her attorney, who
had tried hundreds of cases.